The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The maps illustrate how a public library layout has changed over two decades. In general, the recent library has been completely changed compared to the previous maps with more various
room
functions yet with the removal of face-to-face interaction space.
Back to the floor plan 20 years ago, two round tables with eight chairs on each table were placed along the hall. On the left-hand part of the space, the visitor could find adult fantasy books
and adult non-fiction ones on the opposite side. The grown-up fiction books
' row was placed between the reading area and a multimedia room
. On the other hand
, the non-fiction books
for mature persons were located between the enquiry counter for purchasing tickets, returning books
, and many more as well as
a room
dedicated to children's books
.
The condition of the book room
has been significantly transformed nowadays. The non-fictional books
' row is completely dissolved with three facilities, which are an information desk and a self-service machine, also
adult fiction Rephrase
as well as
books
that have been relocated from the other part of the hall. Moreover
, the fiction books
for grown-ups are replaced with reference articles, and the place that used to be the enquiry desk is renovated into a cafe. Additionally
, the multimedia area is replaced by a couple of facilities. As a replacement, the multimedia facility is upgraded into a computer room
located in the ex-reading room
. Finally
, another room
on the righthand side of the library is now used as a lecture room
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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