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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph represents the level of production of three main fuels in the UK (
Petroleum
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, Natural gas, and Coal) over a period of 19
years
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 from 1981 to 2000. Units are measured in
million
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tonnes
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.
Overall
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, it is obvious that
figures
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 for
Petroleum
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 and Natural gas increased during the given period,
while
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 for Coal, it decreased.
In addition
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,
Petroleum
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 was the main fuel in the UK throughout. As can be seen, the
figures
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 for Natural gas stood at around 40
million
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tonnes
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 in 1981 and it was approximately the same for the next 8
years
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 before increasing sharply to a little bit more than 100
tonnes
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 in 2000.
Likewise
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, the production of
Petroleum
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 climbed from under 100 in the first year to 140
million
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tonnes
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 in 1986. after which the
figures
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 dropped from 140 to around 100
million
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tonnes
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 in the next two
years
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 before reaching the highest point again at roughly 140
million
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tonnes
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 in 2000.
On the other hand
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, the production of Coal witnessed a sharp decrease in the first five
years
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 from 80
million
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tonnes
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 to half. In 1986, the
figures
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 rose to more or less than 60
million
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tonnes
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 and fluctuated for the rest of the period to reach the lowest point at around 35
million
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tonnes
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 in the
last
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 year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum, years, million, tonnes, figures with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • main kinds of fuel
  • time frame
  • location
  • data
  • trends
  • increase
  • decrease
  • specific data points
  • petroleum
  • nuclear fuel
  • natural gas
  • coal
  • fluctuations
  • correlations
  • patterns
  • analyze
  • summarize
  • provide
  • general summary
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