The graph and table below show the number of fishers in millions for different regions in 1980, 1990, and 2000, and the world's top exporters of fish in 2000.

The graph and table below show the number of fishers in millions for different regions in 1980, 1990, and 2000, and the world's top exporters of fish in 2000.
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The bar graphs above show the
number
of those who engaged in the fishery in millions for five different regions in the world in 1980, 1990, and 2000.
Overall
, trawlers are the most prevalent in
Asia
and the least prevalent in Europe.
Accordingly
, the
number
of trawlers in
Asia
continued to increase from 1980 to 2000. The data reveals that the
number
of fishermen in
Asia
and North America increased in the
last
two decades, with
Asia
experiencing a significant rise from 8
million
in 1980 to 22
million
in 2000, more than double.
Similarly
, North America saw an increase from one
million
in 1980 to two
million
in 2000.
On the other hand
, the
number
of fishermen in Africa, South America, and Europe remained relatively stable between 1980 and 2000, with Europe's numbers ranging between one
million
and 2.5
million
during the same period. In conclusion, these findings demonstrate that Asian nations lead the world in fish exports, and
therefore
, they possess a substantial
number
of fishers, surpassing other regions.
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  • fishermen
  • fish exports
  • export value
  • global market
  • socioeconomic factors
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • significant
  • analyse
  • contribution
  • highlight
  • data interpretation
  • regional distribution
  • comparative analysis
  • decade
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