The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the bulding industry.

Contained in the illustration is the information pertaining to the brick production for the demand of building construction From

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overall

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perspective, the process commences with digging the clay moving through many stages of pressing in the shape mould and culminates with packaging

bricks

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. The procedure proceeds with looking for the clay by using the digger. After that, all amount of clay will be moved to the roller to separate the metal grid and the mixture of sand and water. The ensuing steps involve manufacturing the raw

bricks

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by pouring the combination

between

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sand and water into the moulds or moving it into the container and using the wire to cut it into

the

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rectangle shape. Turning to the remaining stages, it can be observed that the total number of

bricks

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will be carried into the

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oven

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for drying in around 1 to 2 days. The following step

involve

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putting the

bricks

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through two kilns with different

temperature

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temperatures

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ranged

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from moderate level(200oc-980oC) to high level(

870o C-1300o C

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870oC-1300oC

). Before packing, the

bricks

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are

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cooled by the champer

in

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2 to 3 days.

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, trucks will deliver all of the

bricks

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to the construction industry.