the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The chart clearly ranks ten distinct countries regarding their electricity production and consumption in the year 2014.
Overall
, it is evident that while
China is the absolute leader in this
figure, that of Korea is the lowest.
As far as the top two countries are concerned ( China, and the United States), there is an imperceptible difference of nearly 1000 and 1400 billion
kWh
between their production and usage amount, respectively. In terms of the third-ranked country, however
, the figure dwindles to approximately 1000 billion
kWh
for both captures. Moreover
, Japan and India had quite comparable amounts of producing and consuming electrical energy with 936 and 856 billion
kWh
for the former and 871 and 698 billion
kWh
for the latter.
In terms of Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany, they all showed roughly the same amount of figures with around 526-618 billion
kWh
of electricity manufacture and about 455-582 usage in 2014. Lastly
, Korea having 485 billion
kWh
of electricity produced and 449.5 billion
kWh
of it consumed in the same year, takes the last
place in this
ranking.Submitted by bita.rezaei7052 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, kwh with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!