the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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, Japan and India had quite comparable amounts of producing and consuming electrical energy with 936 and 856 Linking Words
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In terms of Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany, they all showed roughly the same amount of figures with around 526-618 Use synonyms
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