The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures illustrate different designs of library planning in 2001 and 2009, which contain a list of rooms and machinery on the ground floor.
Overall
, the main difference is in the number of book planners, which is that the 2009 design contains more varied book storage than in 2001 design. Furthermore
, the number of apparatus increased in 2009 with more engagement in technology, in 2001 it was fewer apparatus.
As can be seen from the pictures, the plan of the library in 2009 had more brochure storage depending on the studies, I.e. : history, fiction, self-help, kitchen, economics, law and children’s books. There are also
furnishings such
as computers and Films and DVDs which are put in the main room. There is also
a children's area in front of the children’s album.Submitted by yosf1010 on
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