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The chart shows the usage of yellow taxis and 2 ride-sharing services in New York city from 2015 to 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.

The chart shows the usage of yellow taxis and 2 ride-sharing services in New York city from 2015 to 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.
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The line graph compares
utilization
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the utilization
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 of yellow taxis and 2 ride-sharing services in New York
city
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City
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 between 2015 and 2018.
Overall
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, the three different
type
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types
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 of transport services experienced different trends in the time period.
While
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the
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apply
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uber and
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lyft
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Lyft
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 increased with some fluctuations, yellow
taxi
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taxis
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 declined over time. As the graph shows, the yellow taxi figure started with a gradual growth
around
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of around
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 410,000
in
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on
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 15th
January
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.
Then
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 it dropped rapidly to about 280,000
in
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on
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 17th July. It fluctuated between around 275,000 and 310,000 from 17th July and 18th
January
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.
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, the yellow taxi experienced a decline in the
three years
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three-year
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 period. Regarding
the
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uber,
in
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on
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 15th
January
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 it was around 75,000 users of uber.
Afterward
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, it
rised
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rose
rises
raised
 gradually with some fluctuations to about 405,000
in
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on
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 18th
January
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. In terms of
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lyft
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Lyft
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, there was no usage of
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lyft
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Lyft
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in
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on
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 15th
January
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.
Then
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 it grew slightly to around 95,000 users of
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lyft
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Lyft
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words lyft, january with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • trend
  • usage rates
  • period
  • decline
  • consistent downward trend
  • conversely
  • ride-sharing services
  • substantial
  • user base
  • growth
  • narrow the gap
  • usage rate
  • consumer preference
  • traditional taxis
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