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The line graph shows average house price between 1997 and 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.

The line graph shows average house price between 1997 and 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.
This
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 graph demonstrates the average
house
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price
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 from 1997 to 20014 in countries A,
B
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 and C.
Overall
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 it can be seen that there was considerable growth in
house
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 costs in Countries A and
B
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 during that period of time. The
price
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 of housing in
country
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 C had slight growth during
this
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18 year
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 period. Looking at the details, the
house
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 worth in
country
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 a was marginally going up and the
price
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 of that skyrocketed from 2000 to 2003 and reached the
cost
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 above 500
thousand
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dollars
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, it experienced insignificant decline until 2006 and the one
house
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 was worth almost 500
thousand
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dollars
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. Despite that, the
cost
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 of a
house
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 soared to around 600
thousand
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dollars
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 per
house
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. The
price
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 of the
house
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 remained almost stable from 2006 to 2014. If we look at the average housing
price
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 of
Country
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B
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 we can see that the
price
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 was growing until 2005 with approximately 300
thousand
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dollars
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 for one
house
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,
however
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, the
price
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 dropped in 2006 and only levelled off in 2006 from
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 decline. The typical
price
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 of a
house
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 in
country
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B
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 reached its peak of above 500
thousand
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dollars
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 per
house
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 in 2012 and the
price
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 went down for the next two years. When it comes to the average
cost
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 of a
house
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 in
country
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 C the
price
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 was increasing steadily until 2008 the
price
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 and the
price
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 dropped, In Spite of that the
cost
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 recovered quickly and kept a stable increase

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words house, price, b, country, cost, thousand, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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