The diagram below illustrate how recycled paper is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.

The diagram below illustrate how recycled paper is made.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.
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The flow chart shows the way in which recycled papers are made from used paper for a second time.
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, there are 4 steps, beginning with making cleaned
pulp
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from unfiltered
pulp
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and ending with making new paper.
To begin
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, papers, which were used before, came on conveyor belts to make
pulp
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with
water
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chemicals. Before dropping it into the container, which has soap and
water
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, they filtered it with a net to get filtered
pulp
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. After that, ink was removed from pulps with air,
water
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, and soap. In order to clean the
pulp
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, which
cleaned
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was cleaned
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from ink, it came to a container, which included chemicals, and was cleaned repeatedly. The
last
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step is making. Cleaned pulps are dropped into the conveyer, which has heated rollers. These rollers were pressing and removing
water
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from
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pulp
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the pulp
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pulp, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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