The pie chart below shows the percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India from 2012 to 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart
illustrate
the information about Change the verb form
illustrates
gain
in different types of mass media
in India between 2012 and 2017.
Overall
, it can be seen that media
resources like TV and print are have
Change the verb form
have
highest
percentage of Change the article
the highest
gain
in 2012 and 2017.
First of all, most
popular mass Correct article usage
the most
media
in 2012 and also
in 2017 it television. Following that, in 2012 the figure of
TV was 43%Change preposition
for
,
Remove the comma
apply
after
five years Correct word choice
and after
number
of Correct article usage
the number
gain
increased to just 45%. Fix the agreement mistake
gains
In addition
, most of growth
impacted Add an article
the growth
to
digital, Change preposition
apply
there
was 6% and raised to 15% from 2012 to 2017, separately.
Correct pronoun usage
which
Secondly
, most
popular Correct article usage
the most
media
after television, it
is print. But Correct pronoun usage
apply
compare
with TV, Wrong verb form
compared
gain
of print Add an article
a gain
the gain
was
decreased significantly from 2012 to 2017, 38% and 30% respectively. Unnecessary verb
apply
Further
, percentage
of radio Correct article usage
the percentage
also
reduced from 7% to 4%. Last
one, which Change the article
The last
Correct article usage
the figure
figure
Change the verb form
figures
not
changed Add a missing verb
has not
it
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
outdoor
, Replace the word
outdoors
stayed
Correct pronoun usage
which stayed
on
5% in both years .Change preposition
at
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gain, media with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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