The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams illustrate the life

cycle

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of a

salmon

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, highlighting the growth in three different phases:

fry

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, smolt, and adult

salmon

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.

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, the life

cycle

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of a

salmon

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involves several transformations that occur in three different places of the water body.

Initially

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, the creature begins its life

cycle

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from a

salmon

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egg

that is

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hidden in between small stones and reeds of a

slow moving

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river

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, specifically in the upper

river

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area for around five to six months. Afterwards, the eggs hatch into a

fry

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where the species is now approximately 3-8 centimetres. The

fry

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then

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move

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to the lower area of the

river

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where water flows more rapidly and

remain

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there for about four years. During

this

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time, the

fry

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grows into a smolt, reaching a body length of 12-15 centimetres.

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, the smolt migrates onto an open sea area where it continues to develop for five years,

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eventually transforming into an adult

salmon

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with an impressive size of 70-75 centimetres. The

cycle

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repeats itself when the adult

salmon

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lay

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its eggs on the upper

river

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.