You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The given illustration describes the

process

of making

sugar

by manufacturing

the

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sugar

cane. It is a long

process

which has 7 steps to produce

sugar

from

sugar

cane. First of all, it is very important to grow

sugar

canes

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cane

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which

took

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takes

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at least 1 year to grow and mature.

Secondly

, there are one, two, or three ways to harvest the

sugar

canes

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cane

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. One is by machinery, and the other is by hand. After

harvesting

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the harvesting

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process

,

sugar

can be sent to the crushing machine

to begin

by bringing out its juice. In

this

step,

sugar

cane juice

purified

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is purified

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by a limestone filter.

Then

the evaporator

process

being

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was

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started and the juice started being syrup by heating. In the next procedure which

called

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is called

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centrifuging. The

sugar

crystals separated from the

sugar

syrup.

Last

but not

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least the drying and cooling procedure. After cooling the

sugar

crystals and

make

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making

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it dry it becomes the

sugar

.