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The bart chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The bart chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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The given chart indicates the percentage of weekly
income
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 of families in one country in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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, the percentage of food expenses was significantly high in 1968,
while
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 the
income
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 spent on leisure was the main priority in 2018. The weekly
income
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 spent about 35% on food in 1968, followed by expenses for housing, clothing, and footwear at 10%.
Furthermore
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, fuel and power spending were the least things families purchased that year.
Moreover
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, the
income
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 spent on leisure was considerably high in 2018, covering more than 20% of the weekly
income
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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