The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram illustrates the process of making carbonated drinks.

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, it is clear from the pictures that the carbonated drinks produced consist of 5 steps, starting with the filtering of raw

water

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then

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the addition of carbon dioxide and mixing with additional ingredients in the middle,

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finally

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and finally

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packaging it off to

sold

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Firstly

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, the process begins by filtering raw

water

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through the filter

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adding

water

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softener and chemicals before pumping the

water

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into electric heaters to heat up the

water

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,

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after that the

water

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passes a cooling pipe to stay in the tank which has carbon dioxide and the

water

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will become carbonated

water

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. In the third stage, the mixing tank will provide colouring, syrup and flavour and mix with the carbonated

water

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in the tank, afterward, the readymade

water

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will pass the filter again and

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to the can and bottles.

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, the finished drinks are packed and boxed up ready sent to supermarkets for retail.