Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing
this
letter to inform you that I have
lost my suitcase on the plane in Unnecessary verb
apply
last
week
flight to London.
Change noun form
week's
Last
week, when I am got off from
the plane, somebody Change preposition
apply
asking
me where the nearest toilet and I Wrong verb form
asked
am
Wrong verb form
was
also
in a hurry to meet my family that
had Correct pronoun usage
who
waited
me in the arrival lobby of the airport, so I was too distracted Add the preposition
waited for
then
I forgot about my bag.
I will describe to you about
my suitcase, the suitcase Change preposition
apply
was
made Wrong verb form
is
by
synthetic Change preposition
of
leathers
, it has 4 buttons and 2 zippers, and black is the Fix the agreement mistake
leather
color
Change the spelling
colour
of
it. Change preposition
apply
It
size is about 20 Change the pronoun
Its
centimeters
in width and about 37 Change the spelling
centimetres
centimeters
in length and there is a red tag on Change the spelling
centimetres
of
the zippers.
For Change preposition
apply
this
case, I
I would be very grateful if you let me visit the Lost and Found Department on Saturday Correct pronoun usage
apply
noon
, please inform me what documents or requirements should I bring with me to take my lost bag.
I am looking forward to your response
SumitroChange preposition
at noon
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task achievement
Ensure that the reasons for leaving the bag behind are clearly and concisely explained. This will improve the clarity of your narrative.
task achievement
Use consistent past tense throughout the letter, as the events described happened in the past.
coherence cohesion
Connect ideas more smoothly by using more linking phrases or words to show relationships between sentences and paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a clear structure with a logical beginning, middle, and end.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.
task achievement
The description of the bag is detailed and provides clear information for the airline to identify it.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for a formal request.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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