The diagram illustrates the proportions of students in Britain who have the ability to speak other languages in addition to English from 2000 to 2010.
The diagram illustrates the proportions of
students
in Britain who have the ability to speak other languages in addition
to English from 2000 to 2010.
It is clear that
the students
who do not speak other languages account for the highest figure
and have increased 5
% from 2000 to 2010 ( 30% compared to 35%).
The second highest are Change preposition
by 5
students
who have the capacity to speak Spanish and French,
but have decreased half of the former Remove the comma
apply
figure
from 20% to 10% of students
who
can speak Spanish and 15% to 10% of the latter Correct pronoun usage
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figure
between 2000 and 2010.
However
, students
who have the ability to speak another language and two other languages increased slightly in the 10-year period, with the figure
of the former increasing from 15% to 20% and the latter from 10% to 15%. The number of students
who speak German stayed the same for the past 10-year time
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