The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows the amounts of grain that a certain country produced from 2010 with predictions until 2030. Wheat is the leading grain crop and its
production
is expected to remain fairly stable, along with
maize and rice, whereas
the barley harvest is estimated to double over the period. In 2010, 100 million
metric tons
of wheat were produced. This
figure rose to 105 million
tons
in 2015 and is predicted to increase slightly to 110 million
tons
by 2030. The maize crop was only about a third of the wheat crop in 2010, at 34 million
tons
, and will remain much the same until the end of the period. Rice production
is also
fairly constant at around 25 million
tons
, although
this
dipped slightly in 2015 and will also
do so in 2020. Production
will probably not exceed 25.5 million
tons
in 2030. However
, barley shows dramatic growth in production
, rising from 50 to 70 million
tons
in the first five years. The yield is projected to expand by another ten million
tons
in each succeeding five-year phase, until finally
reaching an estimated 100 million
metric tons
by 2030.Submitted by prakasharjun1998 on
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