The chart below shows the number of men and women in future education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full -time or part- time.
The bar chart represents the number of
men
and women
infuture
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in future
education
in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full
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full-time
time
or part
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part-time
time
for the respective year
. I will explain about this
in the following paragraphs.
Overall
, in 1990 -91 more females started their education
as part
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part-time
time
and it was nearer to 1200. In 1970 -71 within 10 years males also
started their education
as part
time
.
Firstly
,people has
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have
a
option to choose their Change the article
the
education
as full
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full-time
time
and
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or
part
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part-time
time
. Most of the men
and women
started to choose their part
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part-time
time
eduction
. In the Correct your spelling
education
year
1970-71, within 10 years thousands of mens
choose their Correct your spelling
men
education
as part
time
whereas
1990
-91 , around 1200 Change preposition
in 1990
womens
choose their Correct your spelling
women
education
as part
time
. Full
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Full-time
time
education
are
less compared to Change the verb form
is
part
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part-time
time
education
.In the year
1970-71
both Add a comma
71,
men
and women
are in less in full
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full-time
time
education
. In the year
1980-Fix the agreement mistake
years
81
both Add a comma
81,
men
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men's
amd
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and
women
's their
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apply
part
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part-time
time
education
where
reduced.In the Correct your spelling
were
year
1990-91
there was a slight increase in Add a comma
91,
part
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part-time
time
education
.In the year
1970-71 Fix the agreement mistake
years
womens
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women's
women
part
time
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part-time
education
was less and in the year
1990-91 it Fix the agreement mistake
years
rosed
.
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rose
To conclude
, both the
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apply
men
and women
are interested in pursuing their part
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part-time
time
education
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