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You work in an international company. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your employer in your litter 1. Explain why you need this time off 2. Give details of when you want this time. 3 say who can do your work when you are away

#work #company #time #employer #litter
Dear sir, The reason why I am addressing
this
 correspondence to you is that I need 10
days
,
daring
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during
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this
 time I will do many things,
for example
, from July 12 to
july
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July
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 22.
Firstly
, I will not be able to go to
work
 for 10
days
 because my dear brother is celebrating his birthday and I will not be able to go to
work
 during these 10
days
.
Secondly
, my brother's
brithday
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birthday
 is on
july
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July
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 15th, it will take us 1-2
days
 because it's a big birthday party, maybe it will be
langer
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longer
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 than that, so I took
this
 date from
july
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July
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 12th to
july
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July
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 22nd.
Thirdly
, my
work
 is very far from here and it is located
is
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in
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 Moscow,
therefore
 I can't go here because my
work
 is
also
improtant
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important
. I want to leave my best
freind
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friend
 on my bed it works very fast and
of
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 good quality. I look forward to your reply to my letter at the earliest opportunity. Your's
faithfully
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, Jasurbek Eshonqulov
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single main idea and provides clear supporting details.
suitable writing tone
Use formal language consistently, particularly in professional correspondence.
complete response
Address all parts of the task by explaining more clearly and providing specific information about who will cover your duties.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.
complete response
The letter outlines the reason for the time off and provides specific dates.
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