You work in an international company. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your employer in your litter 1. Explain why you need this time off 2. Give details of when you want this time. 3 say who can do your work when you are away

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Dear sir, The reason why I am addressing

this

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correspondence to you is that I need 10

days

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daring

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during

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this

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time I will do many things,

for example

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, from July 12 to

july

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July

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22.

Firstly

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, I will not be able to go to

work

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for 10

days

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because my dear brother is celebrating his birthday and I will not be able to go to

work

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during these 10

days

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Secondly

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, my brother's

brithday

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birthday

is on

july

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July

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15th, it will take us 1-2

days

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because it's a big birthday party, maybe it will be

langer

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longer

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than that, so I took

this

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date from

july

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July

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12th to

july

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July

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22nd.

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, my

work

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is very far from here and it is located

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Moscow,

therefore

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I can't go here because my

work

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also

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improtant

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important

. I want to leave my best

freind

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friend

on my bed it works very fast and

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is of

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good quality. I look forward to your reply to my letter at the earliest opportunity. Your's

faithfully

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faithful

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, Jasurbek Eshonqulov

soglomovsarvarWed Jun 12 2024

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single idea per paragraph

Ensure that each paragraph contains a single main idea and provides clear supporting details.

suitable writing tone

Use formal language consistently, particularly in professional correspondence.

complete response

Address all parts of the task by explaining more clearly and providing specific information about who will cover your duties.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.

complete response

The letter outlines the reason for the time off and provides specific dates.

7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

167 words

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