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The internet has become profoundly efficient and popular that people choose it as a platform to learn. Some believe that it would eventually replace the need for books. Do you agree or disagree?The internet has become profoundly efficient and popular that people choose it as a platform to learn. Some believe that it would eventually replace the need for books. Do you agree or disagree?

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Scientific websites and online courses are expanding making learning easier and available for everyone. You can find whatever you look for on the internet. Some people already started a career by reading the basics of their major in their free time anywhere on their laptop.
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, self-learning will never be enough in other fields. it has disagreed it will completely replace books. it is thought that you can learn everything and anything you want if you have a computer.
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, you can use YouTube to take a programming course and begin your journey as a professional programmer. Vividly,
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 works for only a few professions but you can not apply
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 to all jobs. books are very important and essential in some other aspects. traditional way of having a library is the core of learning. it gives you the basics and gradually raises you to be an expert. you are not able to have an organised educational process on some random websites by reading haphazardly without a clear plan to study or guide you.
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, studying online could be beneficial but you should not depend on it alone as a learning source.
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, you may use E-books to have a look and have a wide knowledge.
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, for every
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, you will need to remember by heart the state of
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 science . I recommend you rely on your book to have real progression in your career.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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