Computers have become so advanced and interactive that students in the future will have no need for a human educator in the classroom. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

Nowadays, people feel that technology will substitute human teachers’ positions in the future because it is very

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and communal with learners in the classroom.

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assumption. The two reasons are

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educators help them mature and get ready to be good workers for industry. The responsibilities of teachers are not only delivering the knowledge to students

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but

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supporting their growth as a human being. School is a small society where people with many different characters are in the classroom.

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, new relationships have been built up through interplaying

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other. When there is conflict among students, human educators can be

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as

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for premature ones

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reconcile after struggling. Another important role of human

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is cooperating with parents and

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community.

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can be utilized for searching some information regarding their topics, playing educational games, and learning their planned subject.

However

, Individual educators use computers as equipment for

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process.

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, they are co-creative with parents and the local community by knowing student’s strengths and

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holistic development for job preparation in the real world. As I mentioned above, even though computers are essential in the learning process for students, the role of human teachers

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human

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and

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for future careers cannot be replaced by computers in

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room.