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Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is suggested by some that inventing a new
language
 for the sake of global communication is essential.
However
, my gut feeling is that there is no need
in doing
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this
.
Language
 plays a fundamental role in carrying distinctive features of all cultures. It reflects every aspect of the people’s lives. So, to realize cross-culture understanding,
learn
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 each other’s
language
 should be seen as the most critical approach. Other than that, learning a new
language
 can be interesting, too.
Through
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 comparing the differences in
one
’s own
language
 and other
languages
, people not only acquire more in-depth knowledge about these cultures and people
,
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they can
also
 be amazed by how much difference there is.
This
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one
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 hand, keeps people learning new cultures through new
languages
, which can result in better mutual understanding, and more importantly, helps maintain cultural diversity, which is probably
one
 of the most important driving forces of human development. Meanwhile, the root of a
language
 lies deeply in the long history of a culture. Almost all
languages
 have gone through hundreds or even thousands of years of evolution and are still changing as the world itself changes. So, it would be very challenging to just invent a
language
 without any trace of modification and variation.
Although
,
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 merging different
languages
 to form a new
one
 could be an option, it is still a very demanding mission, because it can be hard to select certain parts out of these
languages
 to form a new
one
.
Not to mention
 the possible bias in
this
 new linguistic system where the less privileged
languages
 and their users get offended, because they can feel despaired. To wrap up, there is no need to invent a new
language
 just for the sake of international communication. It would largely do harm to cultural diversity and it can be hard in real
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, too.
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