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The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The pie chart describes the activities performed by the
people
 living in the UK, and how these habits changed from 1971 to 2001. The units were measured in percentage.
Overall
, both graphs showed the highest proportion of
food
 and
cars
. In 1971 most
people
 indulged themselves in
food
 and
cars
 and the least number of
people
 gave their
time
 to book.
While
 in the
year
 2001, the opposite occurred, they
also
 spent much
time
 on
cars
 and
food
 but less
time
 on books. Starting with the
year
 1971, in
this
year
 majority of
people
 spent
time
 having great
food
 and
cars
 about 44% of
people
 were involved in the activities of
food
 and about 22% were involved in
cars
. The remaining includes petrol, furniture, restaurants and books about 10,9 and 7
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
 respectively. The
last
time
 was
spend
Change the form of the verb
spent
show examples
 on computers that
time
 and just about 2%
spend
Wrong verb form
spent
show examples
time
 on
this
 one.
On the other hand
, in the
year
 2001 slight changes occurred the ratio for
cars
 increased to about 43% from 22% in
year
Change the article
the year
show examples
 2001 and for
food
 it dropped to 14% from 44%. In regards to others as well showed a slight variation and
least
Correct article usage
the least
show examples
 number of
people
 were interested in reading books only about 1%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, food, cars, time, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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