The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of Use synonyms
people
taking Use synonyms
part
in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 to 2005.
In 1985, the majority of Use synonyms
people
that took Use synonyms
part
in Use synonyms
rugby
reached its highest point with 250 Use synonyms
players
taking Use synonyms
part
in the competition that Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
playing Use synonyms
tennis
was at its lowest point, with only 150 Use synonyms
players
taking Use synonyms
part
that Use synonyms
year
.
Moving on, in 1995, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
rugby
Use synonyms
players
experienced a slight decrease to only 200 Use synonyms
players
taking Use synonyms
part
that Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
taking Use synonyms
part
in Use synonyms
tennis
matches went through a slight uprise of 200 Use synonyms
people
taking Use synonyms
part
in the competition that Use synonyms
year
. Both sports Use synonyms
colided
with each other and had the same Correct your spelling
collided
number
of Use synonyms
players
playing in both leagues during 1995.
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Next,
throughout the 1995 to 2005 period, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
rugby
Use synonyms
players
under went a massive downhill, and reached its Use synonyms
lowerst
point with only 50 Correct your spelling
lowest
players
left in 2005. Use synonyms
Where as
Correct your spelling
Whereas
tennis
Use synonyms
players
went through a steady increase each Use synonyms
year
and reached Use synonyms
its
peak with around 225 Correct pronoun usage
their
players
that had taken Use synonyms
part
in 2005.
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Lastly
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
that had taken Use synonyms
part
in badminton and basketball experienced a steady development with more or less 50 Use synonyms
players
taking Use synonyms
part
in badminton yearly, and 75 to 80 Use synonyms
players
playing in basketball games every Use synonyms
year
.
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To sum up
, in 1985, most Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
tend
to play Wrong verb form
tended
rugby
as one of their most popular Use synonyms
sport
. But as time went on, Fix the agreement mistake
sports
people
Use synonyms
tend
to like Wrong verb form
tended
tennis
more, as its popularity increased and became the most popular sport in 2005.Use synonyms
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