Some people say that playing computergames is bad for children in every aspect. Ohters say that palying computergames can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give youre opinion.
The
influences
of Fix the agreement mistake
influence
video
games
on the youth is one of the most debated topic
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topics
this
century. Some people
believe that computer
games
have potential
to help youngsters to improve, Correct article usage
the potential
while
, others acclaim
that Verb problem
claim
it
only Correct pronoun usage
they
possesses
adverse consequences on the Correct subject-verb agreement
possess
children
's developmental stage. This
essay will consider about
each aspect and mention my own point.
On the one hand, there are several reasons explaining Change preposition
apply
possible
benefits of playing Correct article usage
the possible
computer
games
. Firstly
, some video
games
occupy tasks, which would need critical thinking ability to overcome them. Leading to positive
effect on Add an article
a positive
the positive
children
's thinking process. For example
, there are lots of logical games
aimed to boost problem solving
skills of the players by giving tasks. Add a hyphen
problem-solving
Thus
, to cope them
they need to think logically and strategically at the same time. Change preposition
with them
Secondly
, majority
of the Correct article usage
the majority
games
that are played widely are online-multiplayer games
. Making it possible for players to make
a conversation with other Verb problem
have
people
. Therefore
, people
who play them tend to have better communication skills than who
do not play them.
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those who
On the other hand
, it is true that there are lots of real life
cases where Add a hyphen
real-life
computer
games
affected negatively on people
's lives. Video
games
are usually created to attract players so that it
can make a profit. Correct pronoun usage
they
Moreover
, to attract them they are more likely to add unreal functions to their game, such
as killing zombies or even humans. This
potentially leads to make
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making
children
addicted to them and spend
their time inconveniently. Wrong verb form
spending
In addition
, those games
which included
lots of violence or inappropriate Wrong verb form
include
contents
rot kids' Fix the agreement mistake
content
brain
. To give an example, Fix the agreement mistake
brains
as a result
of playing too much
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many
computer
games
which are improper for children
, they tend to misbehave because of their inability to despair
real life and Verb problem
comprehend
video
games
.
In conclusion, it seems to me that computer
games
can have side effects such
as bad time-management
and Correct your spelling
time management
misbehaviors
. Fix the agreement mistake
misbehavior
However
, from another perspective, in terms of acquiring skills for themselves
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themselves,
videogames
proved its point in being beneficial for Correct your spelling
video games
children
to some extent.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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