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Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
 line graph provides data about the relocation of the population of three
countries
according to
 move from the countryside to the city, which occurred from 2000 to 2025. As can be seen from the graph, the number of
people
 from
countries
 A and
C
 demonstrates growth from 2010. That year number of
people
 in both
countries
 reached 40
million
 and it continued to increase considerably. In 2015 the
numbers
 in country A went up to 70
million
 and in country
C
 to 50
million
. The
numbers
 of country B were stable during the period from 2000 to 2020 and showed a slight rise. It reached
this
 peak in 2020 with 30
million
 and by
this
 year it stayed steady. By the year 2020, the
numbers
 of
people
 in
countries
 A and
C
 show an
overall
 increase of 80
million
 and show an upward trend till 2025.
To sum up
, the
numbers
 of
people
 moving to the urban cities in
countries
 A and
C
shows
Correct subject-verb agreement
show
show examples
 by year’s from 2000 to 2025 significant rise and the
numbers
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
city B stay at the same level.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, people, c, million, numbers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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