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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 line graph provides data about the relocation of the population of three
countries
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according to
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 move from the countryside to the city, which occurred from 2000 to 2025. As can be seen from the graph, the number of
people
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 from
countries
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 A and
C
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 demonstrates growth from 2010. That year number of
people
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 in both
countries
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 reached 40
million
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 and it continued to increase considerably. In 2015 the
numbers
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 in country A went up to 70
million
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 and in country
C
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 to 50
million
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. The
numbers
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 of country B were stable during the period from 2000 to 2020 and showed a slight rise. It reached
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 peak in 2020 with 30
million
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 and by
this
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 year it stayed steady. By the year 2020, the
numbers
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 of
people
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 in
countries
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 A and
C
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 show an
overall
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 increase of 80
million
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 and show an upward trend till 2025.
To sum up
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, the
numbers
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 of
people
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 moving to the urban cities in
countries
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 A and
C
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shows
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show
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 by year’s from 2000 to 2025 significant rise and the
numbers
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of
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in
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city B stay at the same level.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, people, c, million, numbers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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