The charts below show the average percentages in typical meaks of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meaks of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts below illustrate the percentage of
sodium
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saturated
fats
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and added
sugar
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in four various meals which have been eaten in the USA. As can be seen, a large amount of
sodium
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can be found in dinner
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like saturated
fats
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about 43 per
cent
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and 37 per
cent
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respectively. The percentage of
sodium
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in
breakfast
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and
snacks
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are similar about 14 per
cent
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. Almost 29 per
cent
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of the
sodium
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is consumed by eating lunch, which is marginally fewer about 26 per
cent
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of saturated fat in the same meal.
Snacks
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and
breakfast
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contain 21 per
cent
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and 16 per
cent
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of
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saturated
fats
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in
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order. The majority of added
sugar
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is used up by eating
snacks
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roughly about 42 per
cent
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. The percentages of the Other three meals that have added
sugar
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are approximately close to each other. After
snacks
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dinner with 23 per
cent
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, launch With 19 per
cent
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and
breakfast
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by
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with
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16 per
cent
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added
sugar
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. In summary, the main parts of two nutrients namely,
sodium
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and saturated
fats
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can consumed by dinner.
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, a large part of added
sugar
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gains from having
snacks
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.
in addition
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,
breakfast
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includes the lowest amount of each nutrient.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, fats, sugar, cent, breakfast, snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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