The charts below show the average percentages in typical meaks of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts below illustrate the percentage of
sodium
saturated fats
and added sugar
in four various meals which have been eaten in the USA.
As can be seen, a large amount of sodium
can be found in dinner as
like saturated Change preposition
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fats
about 43 per cent
and 37 per cent
respectively. The percentage of sodium
in breakfast
and snacks
are similar about 14 per cent
. Almost 29 per cent
of the sodium
is consumed by eating lunch, which is marginally fewer about 26 per cent
of saturated fat in the same meal. Snacks
and breakfast
contain 21 per cent
and 16 per cent
of
saturated Change preposition
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fats
in
order. The majority of added Change preposition
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sugar
is used up by eating snacks
roughly about 42 per cent
. The percentages of the Other three meals that have added sugar
are approximately close to each other. After snacks
dinner with 23 per cent
, launch With 19 per cent
and breakfast
by
16 per Change preposition
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cent
own
added Correct word choice
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sugar
.
In summary, the main parts of two nutrients namely, sodium
and saturated fats
can consumed by dinner. On the other hand
, a large part of added sugar
gains from having snacks
. in addition
, breakfast
includes the lowest amount of each nutrient.Submitted by Elnaz.darang on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, fats, sugar, cent, breakfast, snacks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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