The charts below show the average percentages in typical meaks of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts below illustrate the percentage of
sodium
saturated Use synonyms
fats
and added Use synonyms
sugar
in four various meals which have been eaten in the USA.
As can be seen, a large amount of Use synonyms
sodium
can be found in dinner Use synonyms
as
like saturated Change preposition
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fats
about 43 per Use synonyms
cent
and 37 per Use synonyms
cent
respectively. The percentage of Use synonyms
sodium
in Use synonyms
breakfast
and Use synonyms
snacks
are similar about 14 per Use synonyms
cent
. Almost 29 per Use synonyms
cent
of the Use synonyms
sodium
is consumed by eating lunch, which is marginally fewer about 26 per Use synonyms
cent
of saturated fat in the same meal. Use synonyms
Snacks
and Use synonyms
breakfast
contain 21 per Use synonyms
cent
and 16 per Use synonyms
cent
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of
saturated Change preposition
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fats
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in
order. The majority of added Change preposition
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sugar
is used up by eating Use synonyms
snacks
roughly about 42 per Use synonyms
cent
. The percentages of the Other three meals that have added Use synonyms
sugar
are approximately close to each other. After Use synonyms
snacks
dinner with 23 per Use synonyms
cent
, launch With 19 per Use synonyms
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and Use synonyms
breakfast
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by
16 per Change preposition
with
cent
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own
added Correct word choice
apply
sugar
.
In summary, the main parts of two nutrients namely, Use synonyms
sodium
and saturated Use synonyms
fats
can consumed by dinner. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, a large part of added Linking Words
sugar
gains from having Use synonyms
snacks
. Use synonyms
in addition
, Linking Words
breakfast
includes the lowest amount of each nutrient.Use synonyms
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