The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart here illustrates the portion of
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
, who were illiterate, across six regions, that are, developed Fix the agreement mistake
females
countries
, Latin America/Caribbean, East Asia
/Oceania, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South Asia
, in last
year.
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the last
Overall
, illiteracy among female
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females
are
more prevalent than Change the verb form
is
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among male
male
in all Fix the agreement mistake
males
category
. The most illiterate Fix the agreement mistake
categories
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
were from South Fix the agreement mistake
females
asia
, Change the capitalization
Asia
whereas
least
were from developed Correct article usage
the least
countries
.
Incase
of Correct your spelling
In the case
male
, illiteracy in developed Fix the agreement mistake
males
countries
were
near zero. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
However
, in Sub-Saharan Africa and South Asia
that Add a comma
Asia,
number
is more than 30%. Arab States are simillar
as it is just below 30% there. In Latin America and East Correct your spelling
similar
Asia
, this
number
is at 10% and below respectively.
For the female, the statistic is mirroring
the males, as the developed Wrong verb form
mirrors
countries
had illiteracy just above zero percent
. But in South Change the spelling
per cent
Asia
that Add a comma
Asia,
number
is at staggering
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a staggering
the staggering
number
of around 55%. In Sub-Saharan Africa and Arab States, this
rate is around 50% of population
. The Add an article
the population
number
dropped to 20% in East Asia
and hovering above 10% in Latin America.Submitted by mostakahmedfaysal on
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