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The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart here illustrates the portion of
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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, who were illiterate, across six regions, that are, developed
countries
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, Latin America/Caribbean, East
Asia
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/Oceania, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South
Asia
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, in
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last
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 year.
Overall
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, illiteracy among
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females
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are
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 more prevalent than
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among male
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male
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males
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 in all
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categories
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. The most illiterate
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males
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 and
female
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females
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 were from South
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asia
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Asia
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,
whereas
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least
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 were from developed
countries
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.
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 of
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males
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, illiteracy in developed
countries
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were
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 near zero.
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, in Sub-Saharan Africa and South
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Asia
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 that
number
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 is more than 30%. Arab States are
simillar
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similar
 as it is just below 30% there. In Latin America and East
Asia
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,
this
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number
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 is at 10% and below respectively. For the female, the statistic
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 the males, as the developed
countries
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 had illiteracy just above zero
percent
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per cent
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. But in South
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Asia
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Asia,
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 that
number
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 is at
staggering
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a staggering
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number
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 of around 55%. In Sub-Saharan Africa and Arab States,
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 rate is around 50% of
population
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the population
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. The
number
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 dropped to 20% in East
Asia
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 and hovering above 10% in Latin America.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, asia, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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