Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?

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The fresh

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water

resource is a worldwide issue,

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related to varied factors, and

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every

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country in the world.

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the increasing demand and some solutions to solve as soon as possible. Nowadays, because of industrialization, many European

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resolved

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problem because every citizen

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able to get drinkable

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, but there is a huge difference with the third countries.

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European people do not miss

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is becoming a global emergency that could affect every nation.

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overpopulation;

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the reason why

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the Chinese

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government has tried to reduce and regulate birth, so they have

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the power to limit and control the population growth;

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is not a reasonable political action to take.

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overpopulation has caused a growing demand

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food, so

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water

has been used by

farmer

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farmers

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for agriculture;

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appropriate and modern infrastructures and machines to give

water

to the soil,

consequently

a huge amount of

this

natural resource is wasted. A solution could be taken by local governments,

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as

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investments in new technologies, which are able to reuse

water

from soil, or more invested money on the creation of food in laboratories, in

this

last

scenario a vast amount of

water

could be saved.

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, global warming has affected significantly

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issue,

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this

reason

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international cooperation should try to reduce

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environment changing

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to preserve

water

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avoiding

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deforestation and pollution, increasing renewable energy. I would suggest teaching and educating children and students to save

water

in everyday life, these lessons could help them to notice their usage in their private

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. In conclusion, I think some solutions could be found to fix the problem;

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, we should work all together to make

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difference.