The bar chart gives information about the proportion of children, men and women eating fruit and vegetables daily in the United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008.
The bar chart shows the percentage of
daily
amount of Add an article
the daily
fruit
and vegetables
Change the noun form
vegetable
children
, men
and women
are having
in Wrong verb form
had
United
Kingdom from 2001 to 2008.
Correct article usage
the United
It is clear that
women
had the highest proportion
of fruit
compared to men
and children
. In addition
, all children
, men
and women
eating fruit
and vegetables increased but also
had a decrease in latest
2 years.
We can see that Correct word choice
the last
women
's amount of fruit
and vegeatable
daily eaten slightly rose every year from 2001 to 2005 registering 23% in 2001, 24% in 2002, 27% in 2003, 28% in 2004 and 30% in 2005. Correct your spelling
vegetable
vegetables
Then
, the proportion
had a rapid increase in 2006, rising to 35 % in 2006. From 2007, there was a decline from 32% to 30% in 2008.
The proportion
was followed by men
but had a different trend compared to women
. The percentage of men
eating fruit
and vegetables daily remained constant from 2001 to 2003 at 18% and then
gradually increased until 2006 from 20% in 2004, 23% in 2005 and 28% in 2006. In 2007 the figure remained stable. Same as women
, men
Correct word choice
and men
also
had a decrease in the proportion
from 2007 to 2008, 28
% to 26%.
Change preposition
from 28
Children
had a similar trend where the figures maintained at the same level from 2001 to 2003 which was 13% followed by a gentle rise to 18% in 2004, 19% in 2005 and 22% in 2006. In 2007 the percentage reached the
peak at 27% and Correct article usage
a
then
dropped to 26% in 2008.Submitted by wjddbs2206 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fruit, children, men, women, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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