Countries with a long average working day are likely to be more economically successful than other countries, but many suffer from some negative social consequences as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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utilization and working

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has garnered

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significant attention among economists and businessmen. Some people believe that countries with longer

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used for working are expected to be more

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in economic than others but they

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face potential negative social consequences. From my perspective, I do not fully agree with

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viewpoint.

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it is asserted globally that working hours

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a strong connection with productivity, requiring employees

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their

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of work does not guarantee economic development.

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is because overworked

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often experience

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and stress, leading to instances of miscalculating data.

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, it can bring about financial losses for companies and, in the long run, hinder the progress of entire industries. We need to

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cautious about the increasing

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social

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.

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, if more people have overtime working, they are compelled to sacrifice valuable

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with their family, especially their children.

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,

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can lead to social isolation among young individuals

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insufficient parental care, potentially contributing to increased rates of autism or even youth crime. From the employees’ perspective, often experience overwork can pose a significant threat to their well-being,

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in depression or insomnia.

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, prolonged mental stress is likely to contribute

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higher rate of suicide. In short, I firmly believe that

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longer working hours upon employees

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not only

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to economic failure but

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give

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rise to potential social issues in

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of citizens.