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The yield percentage of

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marina

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at different

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is presented in

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1. The highest yield of

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marina was obtained from the leaves extracted for 72 hours

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the lowest yield was found in the stem extracted for 24 hours. From the data obtained, it is evident that the

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experienced a dramatic increase in yield percentage as the extraction

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gets longer

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the yield of stem

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slightly increased over

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leaves

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extracts

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have

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yield compared to the stems from all three different

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could be explained by the similarity of the

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and the used solvent in

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terms of polarity properties. Leaves as an initial place to produce and accumulate a wide range of

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before they are transported to other parts of the plant could

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the high percentage of yield

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in leaves.

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results are in agreement with Dewi et al. (2022)

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reported that prolonged

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allows

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longer contact between the material and the solvent so that

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extracted will be more variative.

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, Permatasari et al. (2020) and Fajri et al. (2021) reported that yield extract will soar to the highest peak until it reaches the saturation point of the solution. In

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present study, both leaves and

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extracts

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showed an upward trend as they did not reach the saturation state. Qualitative (

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2) and quantitative analysis (

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3) were conducted to study the range of

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marine at different

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time

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and

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. The results showed that

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and

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compounds

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are present in all

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marina, yet saponin

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are not detected in both leaves and stems.

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can occur because

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and

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compounds

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have the same polarity with the solvent used, causing those

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to dissolve easily in the solvent.

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findings are in line with previous

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as Fajri et al. (2021) who reported that

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saponins

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saponin

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belonging to

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can not dissolve in

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polar

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like methanol, ethanol, or water.

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, Manurung et al. (2017) reported that

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detected in all different parts of Ficus deltoidea extracted using methanol solvent,

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the saponin

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remained absent. The results obtained from qualitative analysis of phytochemical

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among all

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are shown in

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2. The total

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content (TPC) which experiences a steady increase in both leaves and stem extract ranges from 0.000221 to 0.000902 mg/g. Meanwhile, the total

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content ranged from 0.000202 to 0.000905 mg/g.

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compounds

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, the total

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content (TFC) in leaves and stems shows different responses as the extraction

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increases. TFC in leaf

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fluctuates over

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a slight drop is observed in the stem

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task achievement

Your essay clearly presents data and trends, ensuring a robust Task Response. To further improve, make sure to clarify the significance of the findings in a broader context – explain why the data is important beyond just presenting the data itself. This can help in making the complete response more well-rounded.

coherence cohesion

Structurally, your essay flows well with logical progression. However, a more explicit introduction could strengthen the cohesion. Start by briefly stating the overall topic and objective of your research. Similarly, a concise conclusion that sums up the findings and their implications would also enhance the coherence and cohesion.

task achievement

Your essay includes relevant and specific examples to support your points, particularly with the inclusion of data and references to previous studies.

coherence cohesion

There is a clear logical structure to your essay, with a focus on presenting and analyzing data, which aids in the reader's understanding.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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