The bar chart below shows the average duration of housework women did (unemployed, part-time employed, and full-time) when compared to men who had full-time work in the Peru between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart describes how
employments
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employment
effects
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affects
time
spent on house
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housework
work
in Britain . It shows the duration in different eras . There are 3 types of employment
for women
which are , Un employed
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unemployed
Part -
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Part-time
Time
employment
, and Full-Time
employment
. While
there is one category for men that is
, a Full - Time
employment
.
Overall
, The chart indicates that women
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spend
hours
in
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at
work
will have less
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fewer
hours
in
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of
house
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housework
work
. by that means that mantaining
a balance between a Correct your spelling
maintaining
women's
career and Fix the agreement mistake
woman's
house hold
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household
work
could be somewhat challenging .
To be precsize
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precise
Women
that are Unemployed spent 7 hours
on house
responsbility
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responsibility
while
females that are
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were
time
employees spent a median of 2.5 hours
, which indicates that there is a negative relationship between the periods in
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of
work
and time
spent on household chores , on the other side when comparing the duration on household
for men it shows that in 2005 had Add an article
the household
a significant higher
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a significant higher hour
significant higher hours
hours
comparing to 1985 and 1995 which were on the same level.Submitted by nouf.alkhalaifi2 on
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