The graph below shows the percentage of adults whose healthcare need went unmet in the past year from 2008 to 2022 in 6 different European nations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make coparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the proportion of government spending on three sectors between 2008 and 2020.
Overall
, the spending on educational
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the educational
sector
remained at almost the same level, while
the other sectors experienced dramatic changes.
In the initial term, the government spent a large amount of the revenue on the defence sector
, at over 20%, while
educational
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the educational
health
sectors received the same funds, at around 7%. Thereafter
, the budget for health
gradually increased and reached approximately 20% in the final year. On the other opposite scale, governmental money for defence rapidly decreased below 10% in the middle term(1979-1988), when the share of health
exceeded its figure at just 10%, with its figure dropping to about 5% in 2020.
Regarding education, its proportion was relatively stable. It experienced somewhat fluctuation ranging between about 7% and roughly 13%. In 1990, when the percentage of the health
sector
surpassed the educational sector
, the share of education recorded
at around 12%. Add a missing verb
was recorded
Then
, the spending on education slightly declined to about 10%, with a little fluctuation.Submitted by atsutaka_aratame on
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