You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates information about the month of sales of four items(Caffee, Tea,
Pastries
, and Sandwiches
), times between7:30 a.m. to 8:30 p.m. in coffee
shop in an office building on a regularly weekday.
Overall
, In the morning and afternoon Pastries
have popular item, yet in two other times people prefer by Sandwiches
and Coffee
.
According to
chart, people start to go to the cafe in 7:30 a.m also
, in this
time until 10:30 they like reserve breakfast Pastries
and Coffee
with 275 and 265 figures thenTea, and Sandwiches
respectively. However
, for snake they have other situation the number of Sandwiches
and Coffee
are 200 and 185 in 10:30-2:30.
The table shows, in the afternoon between 2:30-5:30, they are so tired, for the employees have same booking as morning, but less so that, the number of Pastries
and Coffee
are 150 and 145. In addition
, in the evening we can see the same items as midday, yet these items have some contrast because the Coffee
are more than sandwiches
so, that have 200 and 110 number.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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