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The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied line graph illustrates how much
coffee
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 was exported from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica from the year 2002 to 2012.
Overall
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, the measure of
coffee
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 transport in whole three countries increased during these 10 years. In 2002, the amount of
coffee
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 exports by Costa Rica stood at 15
million
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kilograms
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, the highest volume in
compers
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compared
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 to other countries.
However
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,
this
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 figure experienced a steady fall until 2006, but it rose and reached 20
million
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kilograms
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at the end
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 of the period. In Colombia, the measure of
coffee
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 transport was at 5
million
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kilograms
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 in 2002.
Although
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, it had a fluctuation
tend
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trend
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,
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at
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in
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 the end,
this
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 amount had a rise and reached 15
million
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kilograms
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 in 2012. Brazil exported
coffee
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 around 12
million
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kilograms
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in
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of in
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 2002 and
this
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 figure dramatically
a boom
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boomed
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 and peaked at 25
million
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kilograms
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, the highest amount of
coffee
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 exports between whole three countries between 2002 and 2012.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, million, kilograms with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph
  • illustrates
  • amount
  • exported
  • countries
  • Brazil
  • Vietnam
  • Colombia
  • over
  • 10-year period
  • experience
  • increase
  • coffee exports
  • Throughout
  • decade
  • consistently
  • highest
  • export volume
  • followed by
  • lowest
  • steady growth
  • sharp rise
  • significant
  • experienced
  • especially
  • significance
  • gradually declined
  • upward trend
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