The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The supplied line graph illustrates how much

coffee

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was exported from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica from the year 2002 to 2012.

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, the measure of

coffee

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transport in whole three countries increased during these 10 years. In 2002, the amount of

coffee

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exports by Costa Rica stood at 15

million

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kilograms

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, the highest volume in

compers

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compared

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to other countries.

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this

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figure experienced a steady fall until 2006, but it rose and reached 20

million

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kilograms

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at the end

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of the period. In Colombia, the measure of

coffee

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transport was at 5

million

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kilograms

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in 2002.

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, it had a fluctuation

tend

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trend

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the end,

this

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amount had a rise and reached 15

million

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kilograms

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in 2012. Brazil exported

coffee

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around 12

million

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kilograms

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of in

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2002 and

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figure dramatically

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and peaked at 25

million

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kilograms

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, the highest amount of

coffee

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exports between whole three countries between 2002 and 2012.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, million, kilograms with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

The line graph
illustrates
amount
exported
countries
Brazil
Vietnam
Colombia
over
10-year period
experience
increase
coffee exports
Throughout
decade
consistently
highest
export volume
followed by
lowest
steady growth
sharp rise
significant
experienced
especially
significance
gradually declined
upward trend

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The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that sport is very important for society. Others, however, argue that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.