Topic: In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. the only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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All cars , buses and trucks will be without

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improvement

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technology. So , only passengers go inside

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vehicles.

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there are some

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and some

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. I will explain more in

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with , the role of drivers

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the roads will fade in the future

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since technology has been improved and driving

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as soon as possible.

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, nobody can solve and control that.

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, it may cars or buses can not

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necessary situations.

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topic and It is my notion that the

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of driverless

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outweigh

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human energy and it

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saved in society for other essential jobs.

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this vehicles

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be regulated with advanced machines.

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, There is not any human error on the roads.

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accident in the world. So , it has

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on people's health in their lives.

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. But it is undeniable that in

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task achievement

You have introduced the topic and given a brief overview of the advantages and disadvantages. However, make sure to clarify your opinions in the introduction and conclusion clearly.

task achievement

Include specific examples or data to support your points. This will strengthen the essay and make your argument more convincing.

coherence cohesion

Improve the logical flow between sentences and paragraphs. Each paragraph should discuss a clear and separate point related to the topic.

coherence cohesion

Be conscious of grammatical issues, such as subject-verb agreement and sentence structure, to improve readability.

task achievement

You have made a valid attempt to discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles.

coherence cohesion

You provided a clear introduction and conclusion, which frame your essay well.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

243 words

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Topic: In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. the only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Your friend is planning to move to your city. Advise him to find accommodation

Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foriegn language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country.Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foriegn language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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