The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the waste of Chicken, Beef, Lamb and Fish in a European nation between the
years
1979 and 2004.
Overall
, Beef and Lamb had decreased during the
years
.
therefore
, Chicken had a noticeable increase and Fish fluctuated.
Firstly
, we can demonstrate that Chicken rose significantly in the
years
1979 and 1989 to approximately 200;
Moreover
, It continued to increase which applied considerable growth till the
year
2004.
Secondly
, Beef had a fluctuation from 1979 till 1989;
In addition
, It applied a sharp decrease to the
year
2004.
Thirdly
, now turning to Lamb we can see that it applied a slight fluctuation at first;
Therefore
, it decreased dramatically throughout the
years
.
Finally
, Regarding the
last
kind of meat which is Fish, it decreased slightly in the
year
1979 to just over a half
then
had a gradual variation in all
years
to the
year
2004.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trends
  • steady increase
  • most consumed meat
  • relatively stable
  • general decline
  • pronounced decline
  • over the years
  • throughout the period
  • depicts
  • span
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