The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the waste of Chicken, Beef, Lamb and Fish in a European nation between the

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1979 and 2004.

Overall

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, Beef and Lamb had decreased during the

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therefore

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, Chicken had a noticeable increase and Fish fluctuated.

Firstly

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, we can demonstrate that Chicken rose significantly in the

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1979 and 1989 to approximately 200;

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, It continued to increase which applied considerable growth till the

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2004.

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, Beef had a fluctuation from 1979 till 1989;

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, It applied a sharp decrease to the

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2004.

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, now turning to Lamb we can see that it applied a slight fluctuation at first;

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, it decreased dramatically throughout the

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Finally

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, Regarding the

last

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kind of meat which is Fish, it decreased slightly in the

year

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1979 to just over a half

then

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had a gradual variation in all

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to the

year

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2004.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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6 paragraphs

146 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumption trends
steady increase
most consumed meat
relatively stable
general decline
pronounced decline
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