Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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image illustrates a map Linking Words
regarding
the Change preposition
of
city
of Brandfield. Planners decided to construct a shopping mall in the area, where Use synonyms
to
potential sites are listed Correct your spelling
two
such
as S1 which is located on the North side near a residential estate Linking Words
on the contrary
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of
S2 which is situated on the Change preposition
to
South east
, Correct your spelling
Southeast
alonside
the Correct your spelling
alongside
Indusrial
Estate.
On the one hand, S1 is an excellent site for Correct your spelling
Industrial
people
living in houses, because it is closer than S2 and benefits them with being able to go walking Use synonyms
while
having an exceptional look at the river, it Linking Words
also
helps with the Linking Words
City
centre being close to the mall, so that it's exposed to more Use synonyms
people
and many can access it without any problem.
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On the other hand
, S2 can Linking Words
also
be an extraordinary area to build the commercial Linking Words
center
because of its far away site where traffic will not be considered as a huge problem and still, the Change the spelling
centre
people
can come from the Use synonyms
City
centre without any problem and Use synonyms
acces
the commercial Correct your spelling
access
center
without having problems.
S1 and S2 are both glorious places to build a shopping Change the spelling
centre
center
, Change the spelling
centre
although
when comparing both of them we can note each one's cons Linking Words
such
as S1 causing traffic for Linking Words
people
living in the Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
while
S2 is Linking Words
on
a noisy area because of the incoming Change preposition
in
constructing
noises in the Replace the word
construction
Industial
site.Correct your spelling
Industrial
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