The charts below show what UK graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The
given
bar charts clearly illustrate learners who Verb problem
apply
Use synonyms
work not
full-time Verb problem
worked
work
after graduation and postgraduation in the UK in 2008.
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Overall
, the popular decision after graduation is having Linking Words
futher
study Correct your spelling
further
in
both graduation Change preposition
at
level
in the given time Fix the agreement mistake
levels
However
, voluntary Linking Words
work
had the lowest score in the given 4 categories for graduated people.
Looking at the UK graduates, keep studying Use synonyms
further
had the highest number with 29.665 students. The second most popular option was getting part-time Linking Words
work
which was higher than Use synonyms
being
unemployment with 1500 candidates, 17,735 and 16,235 respectively. Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, Voluntary Linking Words
work
had the lowest with 3500, Use synonyms
this
number was approximately 3 times lower than the Linking Words
amount
of people who Change the quantifier
number
are
Wrong verb form
were
unemployment
in 2008.
Replace the word
unemployed
According to
the UK postgraduates, the Linking Words
quantitiy
of learners who got Correct your spelling
quantity
further
study and part-time Linking Words
work
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were
almost Change the verb form
was
similiar
Correct your spelling
similar
with
2725 and 2535 and Change preposition
to
he
Correct your spelling
the
difrence
between both Correct your spelling
difference
choise
was 195 people. the number of candidates who were Correct your spelling
choices
unemployment
was about 5 times more than doing voluntary Replace the word
unemployed
work
with 1625 and 345 respectively after post-graduation in 2008.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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