You took your family to a nearby restaurant.you were disapointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.

#restaurant #manager

Dear Mr Weasly, My name is Nurul Hikmah and I am

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a regullar

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regullar

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regular

Costumer

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customer

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at your

restaurant

. I am writing

this

letter to tell you about what I am facing at your

restaurant

this

very

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a very

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bad experience for me and my family. I will tell you In

this

letter.

Fisrt

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First

last

week I went to your

restaurant

The

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apply

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25flower Avenue. I went with my family. we ordered a pizza,

chiken

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chicken

and four soda waters. we

was

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were

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waiting about 30 minutes and

finally

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finally,

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the meal

come

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came

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and I was disappointed with the meal, the

chiken

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chicken

not

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was not

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fresh and the pizza was not delicious. I

said

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spoke

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with the employer but, they

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did

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not respond

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to me

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. I suggest you can solve

this

problem soon. because it can make your

restaurant

lose your

costumer

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customer

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addition

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addition,

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I hope you can tackle

problem

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the problem

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about

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with

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the meal and service. thank you for your attention and

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am looking forward to hearing from you soon Best regards NURUL

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coherence cohesion

Work on organizing your paragraphs better. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to improve coherence.

task achievement

Be sure to address the main points more thoroughly. Include more details about your experience and how you would like the problem to be resolved.

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Polite and respectful tone, which is suitable for this type of letter.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

162 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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