You took your family to a nearby restaurant.you were disapointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.

#restaurant #manager

Dear Mr Weasly, My name is Nurul Hikmah and I am

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a regullar

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regullar

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regular

Costumer

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customer

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at your

restaurant

. I am writing

this

letter to tell you about what I am facing at your

restaurant

this

very

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a very

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bad experience for me and my family. I will tell you In

this

letter.

Fisrt

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First

last

week I went to your

restaurant

The

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apply

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25flower Avenue. I went with my family. we ordered a pizza,

chiken

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chicken

and four soda waters. we

was

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waiting about 30 minutes and

finally

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finally,

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the meal

come

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and I was disappointed with the meal, the

chiken

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chicken

not

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was not

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fresh and the pizza was not delicious. I

said

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spoke

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with the employer but, they

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did

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not respond

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to me

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. I suggest you can solve

this

problem soon. because it can make your

restaurant

lose your

costumer

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customer

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addition

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addition,

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I hope you can tackle

problem

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the problem

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about

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with

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the meal and service. thank you for your attention and

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am looking forward to hearing from you soon Best regards NURUL

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coherence cohesion

Work on organizing your paragraphs better. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to improve coherence.

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Be sure to address the main points more thoroughly. Include more details about your experience and how you would like the problem to be resolved.

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Polite and respectful tone, which is suitable for this type of letter.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

162 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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