📊 TASK 1: The charts below show the percentage of male and female students of different age groups who studied in Australia for full-time and part-time education in 2006.
The bar chart compares information about the percentage of boy and girl
students
from different classes who were given an education
in Australia for diverse types of time in 2006.
Overall
, it's clear that part-time studying for all genders who are 20-24 years old was higher than other categories of time to study and ages, whereas
students
that are 25-29 were the lowest in both females and males
at the time.
This
is in contrast
to 15-19 year-old
Add a hyphen
19-year-old
students
in part-time education
, females were more than males
, which represented 17% and 12% ,respectively. Students
who are 20-24 had the highest proportion of total studying and obviously
part-time Add a comma
obviously,
education
for both genders was quite identical at 14% for boys and 42% for girls.
Moreover
,the smallest proportion of students
were 25-29 years old adults, then
the percentage of both female and male students
were similar exactly, which is accounted for 8%. Nevertheless
, part-time learning for female students
who are over 30 was the lowest proportion even than males
in the meantime. The figures for them demonstrated 6% for males
and 8% for male students
in part-time education
in 2006.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, education, males with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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