The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category compared in 2016 with 2015

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category compared in 2016 with 2015
The information on
export
earnings
during 2015 and 2016 in various product categories, including Petroleum
products
, Engineered goods, Gems and Jewellery, Agricultural
products
, and Textiles, are provided in the chart.
While
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
The table shows the percentage change in values for each category in the same
period
of
time
.
Overall
, Petroleum
products
attributed the highest
export
earnings
for both years of the
period
. Most of the
products
showed an increasing change in values except Gems and Jewelry,
whereas
Textiles appeared as the highest percentage of change during the
period
of
time
. It can be seen that the
export
of petroleum
products
earned approximately 63
billion
dollars
in 2016, increased by 3% from
last
year
Change noun form
year's
show examples
earnings
at roughly 60
billion
dollars
and commanded the highest
export
earnings
compared with other
products
for the
period
of
time
. The increasing trend of
export
earnings
emerged for some other
products
including Engineered goods which gained 61
billion
dollars
in 2016, surpassed
last
year’s
earnings
with less than 60
billion
dollars
by an 8,5% increment,
while
Agricultural
products
earnings
rose 0.81% by more than 30
billion
of dollar for both years. Textiles emerged the most significant changes in value, earned 25
billion
dollars
in 2015,
increased
Correct word choice
and increased
show examples
by 15.24% to 32
billion
dollars
in 2016.
On the other hand
, Gems and jewellery witnessed a lower trend in the
period
of
time
,
dropped
Wrong verb form
dropping
show examples
by 5.18% from 2015 to 2016.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words export, earnings, products, period, time, billion, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • value
  • percentage change
  • compare
  • trends
  • changes
  • chart
  • table
  • overview
  • introduce
  • highlight
  • describe
  • summarize
  • information
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