The table data below shows the world regions Internet users. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table presents the number of
internet
regions in worlds
regions. We can separate all of Change the noun form
world
this
areas Correct determiner usage
these
on
2 groups developing and developed to Change preposition
into
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understand
undertand
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understand
they
are connected
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that they
To begin
i
can say that it is Change the capitalization
I
easily
to recognise a pattern that can be traced by comparing the number of people with Change the word
easy
Internet
access
with the growth
of Internet
use is
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apply
that
in undeveloped regions with the lowest percentage of the Correct word choice
apply
population
with Internet
access
, the greatest increase in Internet
development and increase in users
can be observed
In this
way, according to
the data in the table, we can say the highest growth
in internet
(2000-2010) was in Africa 2.421% in the developing region, Capitalize word
Internet
while
the lowest growth
was in North America it
is developed region.
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apply
Moreover
, In
North America Change preposition
apply
was
the Verb problem
had
highet
percentage of Correct your spelling
highest
internet
users
as percent
of Add an article
a percent
population
(78%). At that time Add an article
the population
In
Africa Change preposition
apply
was
the lowest Verb problem
had
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per cent
percen
of Correct your spelling
percentage
internet
Capitalize word
Internet
users
, only 10% of population
had Add an article
the population
access
to the Internet
In conclusion, I want to say that their connection is expressed in the fact that the greater the percentage of the population
has
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that has
access
to the Internet
, the smaller the increase in new users
and opposite
.Correct article usage
the opposite
Thus
, we can conclude that in developing regios
, the Correct your spelling
regions
region
growth
of new Internet
users
will growSubmitted by viktoria.popova92 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, access, growth, population, users with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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