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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.
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The chart illustrates the number of citizens in 4 countries including Argentina, Indonesia, Italy, and the Republic Of Korea from 2003 to 2050.
Overall
, there was an increase in the amount of population in 3 nations consisting of Argentina, Indonesia, and
Republic
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 Of Korea, with the projected growth of
Indonesian
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stayed
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 at the highest position throughout the period.
In contrast
, the occupants of Italy witnessed a downward trend. The number of dwellers in Indonesia started at 238
million
 in 2003, after which it was expected a significant rise to 274
million
 in 2025, before ending the period at 312
million
 in 2050.
Conversely
, the figure for the Italian population was
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54
million
 in 2003, followed by a gradual decrease to 47
million
 in 2025, and eventually dropped slightly to 45
million
 in 2050
according to
 the examined table. 48
million
 people were the number of Korean citizens in 2003, with a prediction to have
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growth to 52
million
 in 2025 and remain the same in the final year. The figure for Argentina dwellers generally saw similar changes, beginning merely at 34
million
 in 2003, after which it had an expectation to rise significantly to 48
million
 in 2025, and ultimately ending the progress at 62
million
 in 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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