Task 1 The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the average monthly change in the
prices
of three
metals
in 2014.
overall
, the most noticeable fact
that
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is that
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all
metals
shows
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show
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fluctuations
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in prices
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prices
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price
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change
percentage
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percentages
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over the
year
.
On
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In
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January 2014, copper stood
its
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at its
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percentage
price
at
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of
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1% showed
the
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its
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lowest
prices
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price
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for
this
early
year
and reached its peak treble
higher
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apply
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one month later. After that, it steadily
drop
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drops
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to its lowest
price
at -1%
on
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in
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June and October. Even though represented
fluctuate
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fluctuating
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change over the
year
,
this
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these
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metals
showed
a
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apply
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positive progress
the
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at the
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end of the
year
,
leveled
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levelling
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off at 2%
on
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in
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December. Turning to
others kind
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other kinds
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of
metals
, Nickel
as
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apply
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the most expensive metal at 6%
on
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in
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January, showed a huge decrease for the next 5 months
presented
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and presented
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the lowest
price
on
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in
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June at -3%.
Although
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it
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its
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it
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shows
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rising
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rise
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rising
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prices
for the next 3 months, it experienced
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apply
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a
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apply
show examples
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fluctuating
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fluctuate
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fluctuating
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prices
until
leveled
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levelled
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off at 1%
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in
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on
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in
show examples
December,
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dropping
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drop
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dropping
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5 times from its
early
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earlier
show examples
price
. In line with
this
, zinc
also
showed a
fluctuate
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fluctuating
show examples
price
and experienced a small
dwindled
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dwindle
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just
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of just
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over 2%
at the end
of the
years
Fix the agreement mistake
year
show examples
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, metals, year, price with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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