Task 1 The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the average monthly change in the
prices
of three Use synonyms
metals
in 2014. Use synonyms
overall
, the most noticeable fact Linking Words
that
all Add a missing verb
is that
metals
Use synonyms
shows
fluctuations Correct subject-verb agreement
show
Use synonyms
Change preposition
in prices
prices
change Fix the agreement mistake
price
percentage
over the Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
year
.
Use synonyms
On
January 2014, copper stood Change preposition
In
its
percentage Change preposition
at its
price
Use synonyms
at
1% showed Change preposition
of
the
lowest Change the word
its
Use synonyms
prices
for Fix the agreement mistake
price
this
early Linking Words
year
and reached its peak treble Use synonyms
higher
one month later. After that, it steadily Correct word choice
apply
drop
to its lowest Change the verb form
drops
price
at -1% Use synonyms
on
June and October. Even though represented Change preposition
in
fluctuate
change over the Wrong verb form
fluctuating
year
, Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
Correct determiner usage
these
metals
showed Use synonyms
a
positive progress Remove the article
apply
the
end of the Change preposition
at the
year
, Use synonyms
leveled
off at 2% Wrong verb form
levelling
on
December.
Turning to Change preposition
in
others kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
other kinds
metals
, Nickel Use synonyms
as
the most expensive metal at 6% Change preposition
apply
on
January, showed a huge decrease for the next 5 months Change preposition
in
presented
the lowest Correct word choice
and presented
price
Use synonyms
on
June at -3%. Change preposition
in
Although
Linking Words
Correct pronoun usage
it
its
shows Correct pronoun usage
it
Wrong verb form
rising
rise
Wrong verb form
rising
prices
for the next 3 months, it experienced Use synonyms
Correct article usage
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
Replace the word
fluctuating
fluctuate
Replace the word
fluctuating
prices
until Use synonyms
leveled
off at 1% Change the spelling
levelled
Change preposition
in
on
December, Change preposition
in
Wrong verb form
dropping
drop
5 times from its Wrong verb form
dropping
early
Fix the agreement mistake
earlier
price
. In line with Use synonyms
this
, zinc Linking Words
also
showed a Linking Words
fluctuate
Change the verb form
fluctuating
price
and experienced a small Use synonyms
dwindled
Wrong verb form
dwindle
just
over 2% Change preposition
of just
at the end
of the Linking Words
years
.Fix the agreement mistake
year
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, metals, year, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 4 times.
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