Task 1 The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the average monthly change in the
prices
of three metals
in 2014. overall
, the most noticeable fact that
all Add a missing verb
is that
metals
shows
fluctuations Correct subject-verb agreement
show
Change preposition
in prices
prices
change Fix the agreement mistake
price
percentage
over the Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
year
.
On
January 2014, copper stood Change preposition
In
its
percentage Change preposition
at its
price
at
1% showed Change preposition
of
the
lowest Change the word
its
prices
for Fix the agreement mistake
price
this
early year
and reached its peak treble higher
one month later. After that, it steadily Correct word choice
apply
drop
to its lowest Change the verb form
drops
price
at -1% on
June and October. Even though represented Change preposition
in
fluctuate
change over the Wrong verb form
fluctuating
year
, this
Correct determiner usage
these
metals
showed a
positive progress Remove the article
apply
the
end of the Change preposition
at the
year
, leveled
off at 2% Wrong verb form
levelling
on
December.
Turning to Change preposition
in
others kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
other kinds
metals
, Nickel as
the most expensive metal at 6% Change preposition
apply
on
January, showed a huge decrease for the next 5 months Change preposition
in
presented
the lowest Correct word choice
and presented
price
on
June at -3%. Change preposition
in
Although
Correct pronoun usage
it
its
shows Correct pronoun usage
it
Wrong verb form
rising
rise
Wrong verb form
rising
prices
for the next 3 months, it experienced Correct article usage
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
Replace the word
fluctuating
fluctuate
Replace the word
fluctuating
prices
until leveled
off at 1% Change the spelling
levelled
Change preposition
in
on
December, Change preposition
in
Wrong verb form
dropping
drop
5 times from its Wrong verb form
dropping
early
Fix the agreement mistake
earlier
price
. In line with this
, zinc also
showed a fluctuate
Change the verb form
fluctuating
price
and experienced a small dwindled
Wrong verb form
dwindle
just
over 2% Change preposition
of just
at the end
of the years
.Fix the agreement mistake
year
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, metals, year, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 4 times.
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