The graph below shows the population figures for different type of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012.
The given graph illustrates the
population
of three turtle species in India between 1980 to 2012. Obviously, the significant rise Olive
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in Olive
Ridely
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Ridley
Turtles
is
seen for Wrong verb form
has been
an
almost three decades.
A fluctuation trend is depicted for the mean Correct the article-noun agreement
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population
of all species. While
,
its maximum level is 115 Remove the comma
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at
the year Change preposition
in
of
1987, the minimum is seen Change preposition
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just
near 100 Change preposition
as just
at
the year 2003. Change preposition
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However
, the Green Turtle similarly
has a fluctute
trend, which Correct your spelling
fluctuate
its
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apply
ranged
between 90 to 110 in Wrong verb form
ranges
this
period of time.
A significant rise is observed for Olive Ridley Turtles
, which is
started from 100 to almost 130. Unnecessary verb
apply
In addition
, it has the highest population
among the other types, which
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with
its
maximum level is Change the word
a
near
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nearly
to
140, Change preposition
apply
although
Leatherback Turtles
has
the Correct subject-verb agreement
have
least
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lowest
population
. The trend depicts the drasticall
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drastically
drastic
decreased
in Leatherback Wrong verb form
decrease
Turtles
inhabitatns
in the given country. Not only Correct your spelling
inhabitants
do
the Verb problem
has
population
decreased for three decades, but also
the number is
seen Wrong verb form
has also
half
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to half
at
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in
last
years.Correct article usage
the last
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