The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The illustrated pie chart describes the main reasons
of
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for
phone
usage
among teenagers in four
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a
year
period between 2016 to 2019 in an African country.
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four-year
To begin
with, in 2016 social network
was leading Fix the agreement mistake
networks
the
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apply
phone
usage
at 50% reason of
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for
phone
usage
, next to email at 25% and digital camera
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cameras
phone
call
with th remaining in the remaining 25%. The trend shifted to Fix the agreement mistake
calls
usage
in phone
call
in 2017 by 3%.
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calls
years
email reduced to only 19% with Add a comma
years,
phone
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a phone
call
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calls
the
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apply
phone
usage
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consistant
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networks
digitak
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digital
camera
reaching a peak at 56% and 20% in Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
phone
usage
in 2019.
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, a trend shift is observed in the teenager
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teenagers
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ended up being the biggest reason in Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
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four-year
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the phone
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