The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures illustrate the changes planned for the
museum
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between 1998 and 2008.
Overall
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, the
museum
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underwent extensive renovations, introducing numerous new amenities, including a restaurant, fountains, and a café. In 1998, the
museum
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's central
area
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featured a
garden
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, with a café located behind it. On both the right and left sides of the
garden
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were permanent
exhibition
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rooms. By 2008, the left
side
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was repurposed into a temporary
exhibition
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room,
while
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the permanent
exhibition
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rooms on the right
side
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were expanded in length. The
area
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behind the
garden
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was transformed into a restaurant, and a WC was added next to the café.
Additionally
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, the
garden
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was renovated to include a sitting
area
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and two fountains. There was only one entrance/exit door in the
museum
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, with the ticketing
area
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located at
this
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door. In 1998, the right
side
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of the ticketing
area
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housed several facilities, including a shop, WC, and a bags and coats
area
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. By 2008, these facilities were removed to extend the permanent
exhibition
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room. On the left
side
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of the ticketing
area
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, there was a temporary
exhibition
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room in 1998, which was converted into a shop and a bags and coats
area
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by 2008.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, area, garden, exhibition, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular shape
  • central garden area
  • symmetrically arranged
  • expanded galleries
  • visitor flow management
  • temporary exhibition space
  • permanent gallery
  • visitor facilities
  • customer service focus
  • dedicated children's area
  • expanded restroom facilities
  • museum gardens
  • unoccupied outdoor space
  • shift towards long-term exhibits
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