The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures illustrate the changes planned for the
museum
between 1998 and 2008. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
museum
underwent extensive renovations, introducing numerous new amenities, including a restaurant, fountains, and a café.
In 1998, the Use synonyms
museum
's central Use synonyms
area
featured a Use synonyms
garden
, with a café located behind it. On both the right and left sides of the Use synonyms
garden
were permanent Use synonyms
exhibition
rooms. By 2008, the left Use synonyms
side
was repurposed into a temporary Use synonyms
exhibition
room, Use synonyms
while
the permanent Linking Words
exhibition
rooms on the right Use synonyms
side
were expanded in length. The Use synonyms
area
behind the Use synonyms
garden
was transformed into a restaurant, and a WC was added next to the café. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the Linking Words
garden
was renovated to include a sitting Use synonyms
area
and two fountains.
There was only one entrance/exit door in the Use synonyms
museum
, with the ticketing Use synonyms
area
located at Use synonyms
this
door. In 1998, the right Linking Words
side
of the ticketing Use synonyms
area
housed several facilities, including a shop, WC, and a bags and coats Use synonyms
area
. By 2008, these facilities were removed to extend the permanent Use synonyms
exhibition
room. On the left Use synonyms
side
of the ticketing Use synonyms
area
, there was a temporary Use synonyms
exhibition
room in 1998, which was converted into a shop and a bags and coats Use synonyms
area
by 2008.Use synonyms
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