The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures illustrate the changes planned for the
museum
between 1998 and 2008. Overall
, the museum
underwent extensive renovations, introducing numerous new amenities, including a restaurant, fountains, and a café.
In 1998, the museum
's central area
featured a garden
, with a café located behind it. On both the right and left sides of the garden
were permanent exhibition
rooms. By 2008, the left side
was repurposed into a temporary exhibition
room, while
the permanent exhibition
rooms on the right side
were expanded in length. The area
behind the garden
was transformed into a restaurant, and a WC was added next to the café. Additionally
, the garden
was renovated to include a sitting area
and two fountains.
There was only one entrance/exit door in the museum
, with the ticketing area
located at this
door. In 1998, the right side
of the ticketing area
housed several facilities, including a shop, WC, and a bags and coats area
. By 2008, these facilities were removed to extend the permanent exhibition
room. On the left side
of the ticketing area
, there was a temporary exhibition
room in 1998, which was converted into a shop and a bags and coats area
by 2008.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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