Topic: The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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damaging

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of

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natural

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the natural

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environment

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effects

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affects

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from

escalate

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production

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the production

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of consumer

product

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products

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. There are some causes

those

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of

exploration

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wood in the

forest

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and building

industry

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of mine in the

areas

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to support the economy of the country. First of all

exploration

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wood

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in the

forest

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ones of address in some countries because most

people

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do to get some

opportunity

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opportunities

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illegal

loging

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logging

and deforestation

are

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happen in

the

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some

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.

Therofore

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, some

biodevirsity

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biodiversity

will be extinct because

of

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apply

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people

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are destroying

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the forest

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forest

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forests

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.

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,

building

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the building

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industry

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is ones

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ones

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one

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of

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the problem

a problem

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problem

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problems

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right now.

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the

goverment encrease

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government increased

the economy to

built

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build

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some

indutsry

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industries

, most of

biodiversity

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the biodiversity

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are

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extinct because of

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exploration

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the exploration

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of forest

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forest

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forests

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to change area

industry

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,

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, Antam And Freeport are big companies built in

indonesia

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for

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supproting

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support

the economy but the problem is there many extinct

diversity

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in the places.

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damaging

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it damages

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of natural

environment

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solution

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takle

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tackle

take

that causes. The first one is the

goverment

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government

make

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the

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regulation

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regulations

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to give

panushment

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punishment

if

people

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or companies are doing

the

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apply

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illegal

loging

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logging

. so that they will be afraid to do that.

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, it declined

risk

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damage the natural

environment

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. The second one is the company must do

rehabalitation

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rehabilitation

after they

did

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do

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exploration

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explored

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some

are

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industries

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industry

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making planting of trees to overcome extinct wood,

then

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the

goverment

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government

can control every

companies

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company

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if they do not do that they get

finalty

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finally

finality

.

Therofore

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Therefore

, the ecology will

safe

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save

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life

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in

this

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area after they

did

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that.

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, there

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are same

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same

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some

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cases

damage

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of damage

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environment

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like illegal

loging

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logging

and

buillding

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building

industry

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areas

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.

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, to overcome

this

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problem the government

make

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made

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a regulation to decline

exploration

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the

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of the

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forest

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, and the company

need

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needed

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to do rehabilitation after they used the

areas

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. I recommend most

people

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must understand

effect

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the effect

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damage

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of damage

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inveronment

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environment

if they do

deferestation

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deforestation

such

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as blood and

another problems

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another problem

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